Here are some suggestions she made about my work
- I should try showing different versions/experiments of my videos in a project space and get feedback from people to see which is the most successful
- maybe have something with a beginning and an end to draw people in to watching it.
- talked about how it is art and how to make it more art than just a comment on something.
- I explained I wanted the videos to be an experience and she related that to bill viola who said something similar about his videos.
- maybe have more abiguity so its not so obvious what it's about.